average song for genre style
I think the song is well-constructed. I don't hear anything new here though.
The lyric phrasing needs to be a bit more choppy and rushed to enhance the believability that the topic of lyrics is right. Is that how the singer really feels while being chased by a bear? Sounds like he's sitting on a log telling us about it. If it's supposed to be a scary situation, then use more terrifying words and thoughts. I imagine I'm being chased by a big stuffed cartoon bear when I read these lyrics. "But then he's gone! Noooooo?" Does it upset you he's gone?
Because of the normalcy of the overall sound and the lyrical phrasing and content, I've reduced my vote down to a 6.
Still good enough for a free download, so thanks for that!