Demon eating your brain
The main aspects of the song I liked was the haunting melody. It's repetitiveness wasn't annoying, but at the end of the rpa when the beat cuts out and the melody goes off by itself and until the end is kind of weak.
You probably could lose all the talking and laughing at the beginning. It's way overdone in this style of music.
I like your rap style, but doesn't talking about yourself song after song get boring? It gets really lame listening to. Because nobody is that badass!
So I'll knock off a few points for the unoriginal parts of the music and the weak ending (because I'm on a deducting rampage).