entanglement's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Skullfucked (Bard&FCDX collab)]

The applause

at the end. That's hilarious.

TheBardOfBlasphemy responds:

hehe, yeah it's a touch random but, fuck man, i dunno... the whole thing's mental so why not go the whole way, hey? Cheers for the listen!

[Arctic Combustion (Bard&PBomb)]

Massive props

This is crazy great! These time changes are wonderful. Very unique. My only contention is that the talk part goes on for too long. Maybe shorten it to one verse and if you must speak the 2 other verses, add a death scratch to your voice. Maybe scream out some words too. Dig the lyrics. Very astute.

I'd give it a 10, it's just the talking part goes on for too long for my tastes. Thanks for the download!

TheBardOfBlasphemy responds:

fair call... it was in my plans to add some ambient screaming (if there can be such a thing) panned in the background as the spoken word part built up but the idea got lost in the process.

cheers for the ideas and the feedback!

[Falling Up - Fight Cloud]

pretty quiet

I've been playing guitar for 18 years and have listened and enjoyed all genres of music, from classical to death metal, rap to native american. I just don't understand how you can suppose someone is going to like your song for its guitar work. I'm not saying it's pure crap, but I don't find it all that catchy or extraordinary or original . Plus, the drums are too loud for a song you're boasting guitar for.

Now, don't take this as a negative rebuttal because you rated a song of mine as "pretty stanky". I'm mature enough to be able to take criticism and not lash out against it. But since you said in your review of my song that it would be good if it was your style of music, I figured your style must be superb enough to deny all others as something less than. I honestly think you should tuck your ego back in your pocket and walk on.

I appreciated your honesty; although, it wasn't very descriptive. So please accept mine.

FIghtCloud responds:

ok...ok. I guess i can agree with some of what you said. it wasnt really right for me to bag on your song for not liking the style. that doesnt make it a bad song. the drums are a little loud but the reason for that is that this is a demo song and was recorded with a single mic above our jam. so if i had the option to adjust all of the levels seperately than i would have considered some changes. But i do think that i have the right to make the statement "if you like guitar than i think that you would like this song" becuase it is revolved comepletly around my friend and my guitar work together. It could be interesting to a guitar player that its instrumental and all guitar. But also, thanks for your honest review. sorry i didnt take my review of your song more seriously. :)

["Frank"]

spice it up

This song had some damning changes. Nice flow. The mix sucks though. Way too soft on the guitar, and not enough treble.

Work on getting a better mix. What are you doing for vocals?

I'm going to give you an 8 becuase the mix is annoying.

newskies responds:

I didn't plan any vocals. It was just a quick song, didn't think too much about it. It's very difficult to get the sound right. thanks anyways!

[Final Summer]

Bouncy bounce bounce

Yah! That's pretty interesting. Nice changes toward the end. I like the stutter vibrato effect on the piano. Very smooth recording too.

I picture snorkels in a disco-floored room with a bunch of big plastic bouncing balls under blinking colored lights. A rainbow room in fact. Doing this crazy dance; something like Charlie Brown would do, but crossed with the ole dance Rerun used to do on What's Happening.

Thanks for the joy.

Michael425 responds:

haha thats a crazy interpretation man.

thanks for the review.

[Mission: Shutdown]

a bit quiet in mix. tinny reverb.

On the other side of town, Decrypted Entanglement, with molecular chain in hand, approaches the robots. How will the hero take the help? DE doesn't consider it too deeply. DE will destroy the hero if he disputes his help.

[-Survivor-]

"...some back up troops."

From the innermost vacancy of atoms, Decrypted Entanglement, the contoller of Quark magic, learns of the trouble brought on by the machines. No way is DE going to allow machines to utilize any atoms for their cause. DE concocts a molecular chain of events to disintegrate the machines before it's too late. He wonders, as electrons spin around him, if our hero needs his powers on the extraordinary quest. Regardless, DE will destroy the hero if he disagrees.

metallikid6 responds:

It seems to me that Decrypted Entanglement has crossed "Dimensions" and is willing to change the P.A.S.T. for a better F.U.T.U.R.E.
In one Dimension, it is already too late for our hero. But perhaps in another dimension, the hero didn't have to go it alone, when he met Decrypted Entanglement.
Maybe Decrypted Entanglement will save the day and enter into the fray, but the Hero would have to hear it from him first. [PM me sometime]

[Aeltima]

lol

I think he's lolling at the same thing I am.

"An awesome song of mine that I like a lots" -- lol!

Self-love is wonderful is it not?

Anyways, that's what I laughed at when I read your comments. The song is neat though. Not that I need to tell you that. You like it a lots already. -lol!

You should get some more distortion on the rhythm guitar though. Just in some places maybe.

I'm downloading it. I like it a lots.

PenguinBomb responds:

lol oh yeah I forgot I wrote that. I was considering actually explaining the song, but I was too lazy so I just wrote nonsense, and that's what I happened to write :D

more distortion?!! METAL BRUTAL DEATH!

[Serve]

A really bad mix!

And off time. That's what I call it.Polish it up. And tell the drummer to get a better beat.

Centurion-Ryan responds:

I don't follow theory, that's my thing.

Also, it's a drum machine.

I'll admit that the mix it bad, but I'm looking into that.

[Rock Overload DEMO]

heavy metal?

You should move this song into "punk".

I'm giving you a 5, just because it's in the wrong genre.

lordabbrak responds:

Wtheck? Wow, I might as 0 all your songs, like that's a stupid review...Oh wait, you have none XD