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[Drum track]

right on

I don't believe at all that this is random drumming. As a technical death metal listener and player (guitar), I can appreciate all the time changes and fills and little cymbal hits.

It also has a avant-garde punk feel to it, like Crom-Tech.

[Vehicular Mallslaughter]

Second on the trebleness of the cymbals

The guitar has a right on sound. Where's the vox? This song could rock with some. I'll give it an 8 until I hear vox and the cymbal is re-equed.

[(_RGH_) CTSG3(Metal Newscast)]

newsacast for a war maybe

Sounds like impending doom. Dug it! This is really good.

RyeGuyHead responds:

Thanksss

[One Last Memory]

Sidewalks with moss and fantasy stuff

Like the rhythm at 1:50. That's it... no just kidding.

Beautiful tune. Yah, I think the title is kind of lame too.

I dig the twists and turns throughout. I'd give it a 10, but I'll save the point until I hear vocals with it.

[Magnum-Metaljonus]

Very Good

The music you have shared here is astounding! Excuse me while I download this song. Thank you!

[The Vital Scourge (vox)]

good

I like this tune. Tad bit too much reverb on the lo vox. Other than that... pretty scary. And I don't mean "pretty"!

-1 point for too much reverb.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks man. Another one I haven't yet polished. :( This one, I actually compressed /eq'd the vocals AFTER I put on the effects, because it dampened the clipping, as I recorded at too high a volume. So when I get this one worked out, I'll expect that ten. haha.

Thanks for all the great reviews, bro. Kick ass reads!\m/

[Sleep In Your Tomb]

Not to be a dick but

I think the music is good. I like the vocal structure and the change in styles of vocals throughout the song, but it seems to me that your potential is greater than what's displayed here.

The first 3 verses are strong. Maybe where you run out of breath, you can record only that line/or lines and start a new track; for recording purposes.

Bring... to the ...drain is also strong, but I think you should've ended the clean voice there and just let the hi-death vocal be by itself to the end.

Otherwise... very nice.

-1 point for loss of potential.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks a lot, man. This is yet, also unfinished, cause of time and my extreme lazyness...haha. But I hear what you are saying, for sure. I'm gonna have to take a couple days and get some shit polished.
Thanks for the reminders, dude. Dig your reviews a lot.
\m/

[Rig and Sorohanros challenge]

yahhhh!

Ooooh. I really like that change at 1:05. Dibbity-doo-doo-doo-wah-doo-wah!

Hmmm. I think your distorted solo should shred to raise the stakes. Break the monotony. I'll minus 1 point for that.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks very much, for another wicked review dude.
This was really tough for me. I'm not a great shredder, and could hear in my head what was needed...sadly my fingers couldn't really pull it off for me. haha. Plus this backing track on its own was very excellent, and I almost felt like I wasn't really a positive contribution. But very glad you dig it, man. Thanks again!\m/

[The Metaljonus Challeng BMI]

Give your hand a break... jeez!

This song is sweet so far. Awesome soloing. You mentioned in a response that you were thinking about vocals. You should keep the solos and start vox at the change a minute into the song.

I'll hold back a point until I hear the vox added in.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

I agree. I just hope I actually get around to some vocals for this. I'm so strapped for time most days. Especially for vocals. I have 3 kids, a wife, and an "evening" job, so I don't get much time anymore to scream my ass off. If you have any vocal ideas, fly at it, man! I'd love to hear some shit!\m/

[Metal Buurthday, bitches]

That's f'en right on!

It's Happy Birthday, but it's got its own twist. What a great concept fadeshadow had. You should extend this with some more shred solos. Make it epic.

Sorry, only a 9 until it's extended. Maybe get a real drummer and have MindOverMatt add in some of his expert bass lines. This song will rip!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Yeah, it would man. haha. GOod Ideas. I'll definitely have to give that a go...however...there is only that one melody. I'd have to invent some stuff to go with it. haha.

Want in?

Thanks for the review, dude.\m/