Gangster JeAnz Hmmm. What did you do? The guitar?
I'll give a general review since I'm not sure what you did on this. Guitar? Beat? Singing?
Production: The guitar sounds too crisp, clean, and trebly against the more bassier vocals.
Other than that I like the song.
I'm the same age as you, and I grew up listening to rap when it was hardly listened to by whities; before it was gangsta... well right as NWA came on the scene. Back then Ice-T was on a mission to unify the gangs of east and west L.A. Then I flipped into heavy metal. Then came what was called the wiggers. I'm sure you remember those days. I was junior/senior in highschool during the change.
Anyways, good enough to download and give a good rating.
-1 point for production. -1 point for general feeling about song.