entanglement's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Final Summer]

Bouncy bounce bounce

Yah! That's pretty interesting. Nice changes toward the end. I like the stutter vibrato effect on the piano. Very smooth recording too.

I picture snorkels in a disco-floored room with a bunch of big plastic bouncing balls under blinking colored lights. A rainbow room in fact. Doing this crazy dance; something like Charlie Brown would do, but crossed with the ole dance Rerun used to do on What's Happening.

Thanks for the joy.

Michael425 responds:

haha thats a crazy interpretation man.

thanks for the review.

[-Survivor-]

"...some back up troops."

From the innermost vacancy of atoms, Decrypted Entanglement, the contoller of Quark magic, learns of the trouble brought on by the machines. No way is DE going to allow machines to utilize any atoms for their cause. DE concocts a molecular chain of events to disintegrate the machines before it's too late. He wonders, as electrons spin around him, if our hero needs his powers on the extraordinary quest. Regardless, DE will destroy the hero if he disagrees.

metallikid6 responds:

It seems to me that Decrypted Entanglement has crossed "Dimensions" and is willing to change the P.A.S.T. for a better F.U.T.U.R.E.
In one Dimension, it is already too late for our hero. But perhaps in another dimension, the hero didn't have to go it alone, when he met Decrypted Entanglement.
Maybe Decrypted Entanglement will save the day and enter into the fray, but the Hero would have to hear it from him first. [PM me sometime]

[Aeltima]

lol

I think he's lolling at the same thing I am.

"An awesome song of mine that I like a lots" -- lol!

Self-love is wonderful is it not?

Anyways, that's what I laughed at when I read your comments. The song is neat though. Not that I need to tell you that. You like it a lots already. -lol!

You should get some more distortion on the rhythm guitar though. Just in some places maybe.

I'm downloading it. I like it a lots.

PenguinBomb responds:

lol oh yeah I forgot I wrote that. I was considering actually explaining the song, but I was too lazy so I just wrote nonsense, and that's what I happened to write :D

more distortion?!! METAL BRUTAL DEATH!

[Serve]

A really bad mix!

And off time. That's what I call it.Polish it up. And tell the drummer to get a better beat.

Centurion-Ryan responds:

I don't follow theory, that's my thing.

Also, it's a drum machine.

I'll admit that the mix it bad, but I'm looking into that.

[Rock Overload DEMO]

heavy metal?

You should move this song into "punk".

I'm giving you a 5, just because it's in the wrong genre.

lordabbrak responds:

Wtheck? Wow, I might as 0 all your songs, like that's a stupid review...Oh wait, you have none XD

[(_RGH_) CTSG3(Metal Newscast)]

newsacast for a war maybe

Sounds like impending doom. Dug it! This is really good.

RyeGuyHead responds:

Thanksss

[The Vital Scourge (vox)]

good

I like this tune. Tad bit too much reverb on the lo vox. Other than that... pretty scary. And I don't mean "pretty"!

-1 point for too much reverb.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks man. Another one I haven't yet polished. :( This one, I actually compressed /eq'd the vocals AFTER I put on the effects, because it dampened the clipping, as I recorded at too high a volume. So when I get this one worked out, I'll expect that ten. haha.

Thanks for all the great reviews, bro. Kick ass reads!\m/

[Sleep In Your Tomb]

Not to be a dick but

I think the music is good. I like the vocal structure and the change in styles of vocals throughout the song, but it seems to me that your potential is greater than what's displayed here.

The first 3 verses are strong. Maybe where you run out of breath, you can record only that line/or lines and start a new track; for recording purposes.

Bring... to the ...drain is also strong, but I think you should've ended the clean voice there and just let the hi-death vocal be by itself to the end.

Otherwise... very nice.

-1 point for loss of potential.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks a lot, man. This is yet, also unfinished, cause of time and my extreme lazyness...haha. But I hear what you are saying, for sure. I'm gonna have to take a couple days and get some shit polished.
Thanks for the reminders, dude. Dig your reviews a lot.
\m/

[Rig and Sorohanros challenge]

yahhhh!

Ooooh. I really like that change at 1:05. Dibbity-doo-doo-doo-wah-doo-wah!

Hmmm. I think your distorted solo should shred to raise the stakes. Break the monotony. I'll minus 1 point for that.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks very much, for another wicked review dude.
This was really tough for me. I'm not a great shredder, and could hear in my head what was needed...sadly my fingers couldn't really pull it off for me. haha. Plus this backing track on its own was very excellent, and I almost felt like I wasn't really a positive contribution. But very glad you dig it, man. Thanks again!\m/

[The Metaljonus Challeng BMI]

Give your hand a break... jeez!

This song is sweet so far. Awesome soloing. You mentioned in a response that you were thinking about vocals. You should keep the solos and start vox at the change a minute into the song.

I'll hold back a point until I hear the vox added in.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

I agree. I just hope I actually get around to some vocals for this. I'm so strapped for time most days. Especially for vocals. I have 3 kids, a wife, and an "evening" job, so I don't get much time anymore to scream my ass off. If you have any vocal ideas, fly at it, man! I'd love to hear some shit!\m/